Chương 44: CHAPTER FORTY-FOUR: THE RIFLE
The Greyhold Charter · Lostxwriter · 200 chương · ~10 phút đọc · Tạo 31/07/2026
The prototype was ready in July. Briggs brought it to the council session in a cloth wrapping, which he set on the table and unwrapped with the practical care of someone handling something that was dangerous and deserved to be treated as such. Not theatrical — practical. The distinction was visible in the way he did it. It was not beautiful. It was not supposed to be beautiful — it was a first working prototype, and first working prototypes were proof-of-concept rather than finished product.
The barrel was thicker than it would eventually need to be, because Briggs had built to the material's conservative tolerances rather than its optimal ones. The lock mechanism was functional and not elegant. The stock was shaped to fit the hand adequately and not to fit it perfectly. It was, nonetheless, a rifle.
A flintlock single-shot rifle in a world that had never seen one, produced by a combat engineer working from memory and first principles with a medieval forge and the best iron the blast furnace could produce. Hollis picked it up with the careful respect of a soldier handling an unfamiliar weapon and examined it with the professional attention of someone who understood ballistics from the user's side rather than the maker's.
He checked the mechanism, tested the weight and balance, looked down the barrel at the light, and set it back on the table.
"How accurate?" he said.
"At fifty yards, I can consistently hit a target the size of a man's chest," Briggs said.
"At a hundred yards, I can hit it most of the time. Beyond that, the barrel quality limits consistency — the bore isn't as uniform as a machined barrel and the ball doesn't seat with the precision you'd get from factory-produced ammunition." He paused.
"That's the first generation. The second generation, with the improvements I know to make now, will be better."
"Reload time?" Hollis said.
"Forty seconds if you know what you're doing and don't rush it," Briggs said.
"Sixty if you're doing it under pressure for the first time."
"That's slow," Hollis said.
"A competent archer can release three arrows in forty seconds."
"A competent archer can't reach a hundred yards with meaningful accuracy," Briggs said.
"The range is the value. Not the fire rate."
"For now," Hollis said.
"For now," Briggs agreed.
"The fire rate improves with experience and with better ammunition consistency. What doesn't change is the effect at range." This tale has been unlawfully lifted without the author's consent. Report any appearances on Amazon. Marcus looked at the rifle on the table. He had been thinking about this moment since March — had been thinking about its implications, its risks, what it changed and what it didn't change. The council had already made the decision. The protocols were in place.
What he was looking at was the thing the decision had produced.
"Test it," he said.
"Full protocol test. Hollis's selection for the initial four operators, training program developed before anyone fires it in a defensive context, full documentation of every unit produced and every round used." He paused.
"And I want to see it fired before we deploy it."
"Tomorrow," Briggs said.
"North of town. The valley Amara used for the device tests." Marcus nodded.
"I'll be there." The firing test was the next morning, in the valley that Washington had identified eighteen months ago as acoustically contained. Briggs, Hollis, Marcus, and Washington attended. The four garrison soldiers Hollis had selected were not present — they would begin their training after the protocol test confirmed the weapon's function. This was a systems test, not an operational test. Briggs fired it himself. The sound was not what Marcus had expected.
He had been near rifles before — had qualified on his service weapon, had been in proximity to various weapons in training contexts, had heard the specific sound of different calibers in different environments. This sound was its own thing: not modern, not the precise crack of a machined firearm with consistent powder loads and uniform ammunition. It was larger and less precise than that, a sound with more physical presence, the kind of sound that belonged to a different scale of mechanical event.
The target — a wooden frame at fifty yards with a cloth panel — showed a hole at approximately center mass.
"Good," Hollis said, with the economy of assessment he reserved for things that had performed to specification. Washington was already writing in her notebook — powder charge, ball weight, flash pan configuration, the technical variables that she would document for the protocol record. She had been involved in the ammunition development as much as the device chemistry, because the powder compound was the same base material and the dose calibration was her domain.
"Second shot?" Briggs said, beginning the reload process.
"Yes," Marcus said. He watched the reload. Forty-five seconds, under non-pressure conditions, in the hands of the man who had built the thing. The second shot hit four inches from the first at fifty yards. Marcus stood in the valley in the morning light and thought about what he was looking at. Not the rifle itself — the rifle was a tool, and tools were evaluated by their fitness for their purpose. He was thinking about what the rifle's existence meant, which was different from what it did.
It meant they were committed to a trajectory. Every capability they built locked in the next capability and the capability after that, through the logic of the developmental sequence. The blast furnace had made the rifle possible. The rifle made the next generation of defensive capability possible. Each step was a commitment to the steps that followed. He had known this when the council voted. He had known it when he watched Briggs begin the work.
He was knowing it again now, in the specific way that you knew things differently when they became real.
"Document everything," he said to Washington.
"Already am," she said, without looking up.

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