Chương 25: Chapter 23 — Ghoul
Isekai'd Too Late: Please Don't Eat the Guinea Pig · Taliorn · 52 chương · ~15 phút đọc · Tạo 21/08/2026
They waited until the next morning. Proper documentation needed to happen, the king had to be informed, and given a chance to say no at least. With no word from the king to stop it, they scheduled it for the morning. Fenwick had to write three reports and fully explain the last level of experience gained. Sometime in the middle of that, he made the effort to write to his mother. When life changed this much, it was somehow more important to him.
[NOTIFICATION] ──────────────────────────── ⚠️ EVOLUTION AVAILABLE — GHOUL The butterfly appeared at the edge of the prompt. Yellow. Wings moving with the slow, deliberate rhythm of something real. It hovered directly over the confirm button and waited. Max watched it. The room watched Max. He had been still for a long time. A different kind of still — purposeful, directed inward, the stillness of something working rather than waiting. The jaw had set.
Around the empty sockets, the bone itself seemed to have shifted slightly, the angles changing slightly. The tendons at the neck had pulled taut. Something in there was trying to figure out the prompt. His hand came up. It stopped. Fenwick held his breath on the shoulder. The hand stayed where it was for three full seconds. Then it moved again, slowly, and his fingers touched the butterfly and the button beneath it at the same time.
[NOTIFICATION] ──────────────────────────── ⚠️ EVOLUTION CONFIRMED The dancing figures appeared in numbers Sindy had never generated before, then stopped as the system moved into something it had no celebration vocabulary for. [NOTIFICATION] ──────────────────────────── BEFORE EVOLUTION PROCEEDS, SECURE ONE ATTRIBUTE. THIS ATTRIBUTE WILL BE PRESERVED SELECT NOW The stat block appeared, each number in place and ready.
CHOOSE ONE ──────────────────────────── STR 4 — AGI 1 — END 9 — INT 3 — PER 2 — CHA -3 Sindy put the butterfly over END. She held it there. She did not move it toward the button. She did not animate it with urgency. She placed it over the 9, let it rest, its wings moving slowly, and waited to see if something in the rotted mind understood what that number meant. What getting up meant. What staying meant. Max looked at the butterfly. He looked at the 9. His hand came up and pressed END.
This tale has been unlawfully obtained from Royal Road. If you discover it on Amazon, kindly report it. [NOTIFICATION] ──────────────────────────── END SECURED — 9 THIS ATTRIBUTE IS PRESERVED EVOLUTION PROCEEDING The room went completely quiet. Nobody moved. Nibbles had his paws clasped before him. Fenwick had both hands on the harness straps. Marvella was watching Max's face. Aldous was watching the screen.
The Order of the Eternal Flame stood in their dark red robes and waited, which was the thing they had been built for across four centuries, and none of them had ever waited for anything like this. Max stood at the head of the table and did nothing. Then the light came from inside him. Quiet. A low luminescence moving under the skin, slow and diffuse, travelling somewhere with purpose. Nothing like the sword catching fire. Something older than that. Fenwick stood up from the table. The rot went first.
It pulled back from his hands, from his face, from the places where months of arrested decay had settled into the texture of him. The grey-yellow of old death retreating and leaving something else behind. New skin, pale grey, the grey of early morning rather than the grey of something gone wrong. Pulling taut across the knuckles and filling the hollows. His face changed. Places where the meat and skin had rotted away grew back. The cheekbones softened.
The places where the skin had pulled tight and wrong filled in slowly, the light moving underneath doing its work, and the face that emerged was still not a living face, but it was a face. Structured. Present. Belonging to someone rather than something. Hair came next, dark, growing with the unhurried certainty of something that had always intended to be there and was arriving late. The neck. The wound that had been the worst of it, ragged and deep and long, settled into itself, drew together. Closing.
The skin pulling across it, slowly scarring over in real time, the edges meeting and sealing, leaving a scar that would stay. That was his. That was part of the record. His eyes. The glow in his sockets dimmed. Not extinguishing — changing. The light was pulling inward, condensing, and in the space it left behind, something was forming. Slow. Deliberate. The way things formed when the body remembered what it was supposed to be. Eyes. Dark and present, looking out from where only light had been before.
The first thing they did was blink. Once. Slowly. The eyes scanned the watchers. What was underneath was dark and hungry, and it looked at the Order in the doorway and saw meat. Sixteen small warm bodies. The Order stopped breathing. Nibbles had invited the full Order to watch this moment, not knowing if it was their last. They stood in their dark red robes, watching with expressions of creatures witnessing something the texts had not prepared them for. Marvella stepped forward.
Compassion drove her forward, worry about the life or unlife that was before her. She was carrying the moccasins, soft leather, carefully made, sized for something considerably larger than a guinea pig, requisitioned from the palace stores the previous evening on her own initiative without telling anyone. She crossed the room to where Max stood, and she knelt, and she began to work the old boot off his foot. Max looked down at her. The new eyes found her and stayed there. His jaw moved.
The capacity for language was there now, but the vocabulary was limited, and even with the change, the words needed to be relearned. His mouth opened slightly. A thin line of saliva traced from his lower lip. Marvella kept working. She unlaced the old boot. She set it aside. She slid the first moccasin onto his bare foot, which had been bare for at least fifty-nine days.
She laced it carefully and moved to the second without pausing, without looking up, with the steady composure of someone who had made a decision in the doorway and was seeing it through. She tied the second lace. She stood. She stepped back. Max looked at his feet. Both covered now, the plain soft leather sitting where one boot and one bare foot had been since the beginning. He lifted one foot slightly and set it down. Lifted the other.
His head tilted with the consideration of something, examining a new fact about itself. His eyes came up. They moved across the room. There was a hunger there in his eyes, something that the zombie didn't have. The zombie ate as a memory of what it used to do. This new form radiated hunger, and the Order wasn't sure it was safe from it. The Order stood very still. Then his eyes found the door. Then Fenwick.
"Out?" said Max. One syllable. Rough, unpracticed, arriving from a throat that was still learning what it was for. A question directed at a specific person, awaiting an answer. The room was very still. Fenwick had been with him since the beginning. Fifty-nine days of beetles and butterflies and cave goblins and one giant, and all of it had been pointed at this — a voice, a word, a question asked of someone specific.
He understood immediately what Max was asking, and he understood something else too, something that arrived quietly alongside it. He was being trusted with the answer.
"Yes," said Fenwick.
"Let's go out." [SYSTEM PRIVATE LOG] ──────────────────────────── [System Private Log — Entry 59] Day 59 in the fantasy realm. He pressed END. I showed him where it was. He looked at it for a long time, and then he pressed it. I don't know if he understood what END 9 means. I don't know if something underneath the rot remembered what it felt like to keep getting up. I don't know if he picked it because it was the biggest number or because it was the right one. He picked it.
After the evolution, his eyes moved across the room before they found the door. I watched them move. I know what he was looking at. Fenwick said yes before I could say anything. ▌ Becca, if you're reading this: ▌ He's in there. ▌ He's been in there the whole time. ▌ We have to keep him there.

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