Chương 52: Chapter 51 - Commanding Shout
Echoes of the First Magi · JBHarrison.Author · 75 chương · ~33 phút đọc · Tạo 04/07/2026
"I have begun asking questions I should have asked years ago. Alastair answers them pleasantly and without hesitation, which I have come to understand means nothing at all. I have written down what I know and what I suspect in two separate columns. The second column grows ever longer. I don't know yet what I intend to do with this information, but I find I cannot stop adding to it."
From the diary of Lady Victoria Thorne, two months before her death ISABELLA There were times when anonymity was a shield, and times when a name was a battering ram. Today, I needed the ram. The Kaz-Varr Adventurer's Guild Hall loomed at the end of the promenade, a monolithic block of granite that felt like a challenge issued to the city itself. Fifty-foot statues of dwarven paragons flanked the huge iron doors. Kaz-Varr did everything just a bit bigger than seemed strictly sensible.
I stepped out of my rented carriage, two of my father's elite house guards in full black and silver plate tailed me on either side. I had dressed for the occasion - a gown of dark grey silk, a tailored riding coat bearing the Thorne crest, and an expression of utter disdain. I engaged [Courtier's Composure], locking the anxiety of my true purpose deep behind a wall of ice. The interior of the hall was a towering vault supported by stone pillars that disappeared into the darkness above.
Hundreds of mages crammed into the space, a desperate tide of low-level adventurers drawn by the opening of the Clockwork Tomb. I activated [Social Insight] and my vision swam with a blinding storm of auras, diverse and undisciplined. Emotions leaked out all over, the power spikes and lapses in basic aura hygiene causing a migraine to form behind my eyes. As I walked deeper into the hall, the colors began to shift. It started as a ripple near the entrance and spread inward like a drop of blood in a basin of water.
Conversations died, heads turned. The ambient noise of the hall dropped an entire octave and my [Social Insight] flared with sudden suffocating intensity as a sea of dark red hostility pooled in my direction. They saw the emblem on my guards' tabards, a symbol they knew all too well. To these people, I was the pampered heir of the man currently choking their supply lines and bleeding their economy.
Victor had warned me against coming here, confused why I would even want to, but I had insisted it was none of his concern. He'd wanted to come, but I'd refused outright - his presence would ensure the chaos I was trying to avoid. The crowd parted and I kept my chin elevated, my eyes fixed straight ahead, letting the ice of my class skill absorb the heat of their glares.
It was exhausting, wading through that much concentrated malice, but I needed to bypass the bureaucratic nightmare of the registration lines and that meant using my name. As I glided past a cluster of scarred veterans, a snippet of their conversation broke through the tense silence.
"-absolute suicide," a grizzled human with a missing ear was muttering, shaking his head.
"Just walked up to the desk and demanded the Iron Gauntlet."
"Against Bagor?" His companion, a dwarf in dented mail, snorted.
"He's never lost a gauntlet match; he's going to smear the idiot across the sand."
"That's the best part," the human chuckled darkly.
"The challenger is an E-Ranker, doesn't even have all his limbs. They're holding Arena Four right now. I put ten silver on Bagor breaking his remaining arm in the first thirty seconds." A one-armed E-Ranker taking the Iron Gauntlet during a dungeon rush was the exact brand of desperate, bloody spectacle this place fed on. It was a useful distraction, the crowd's bloodlust was already pulling their attention away from me and toward the training pits in the lower levels.
I reached the elevated stone pulpits where the guild clerks processed the endless tide of applicants. A harried-looking dwarf was currently shouting down at someone over a missing signature, but his voice faltered as my two armored guards stepped up to the counter beside me. He looked down from his pulpit, his irritation evaporating into wide-eyed, bureaucratic terror as he recognized the crest.
"L-Lady Thorne," he stammered, hastily wiping ink from his fingers.
"I... I was not informed you would be gracing the Hall today. The Guildmaster is currently in a meeting with the Commission, but if you'd like to wait in the VIP-""I am not here for the Guildmaster," I said, not raising my voice to force the dwarf to lean over his desk to hear me.
"I require access to the loot intake vaults. I am looking for someone in your employ. An ursani named Garrick." The clerk blinked, clearly thrown by the request.
"Garrick? But... My Lady, the lower vaults are restricted. They are dirty, and the inventory is currently overflowing due to the dungeon rush. It is hardly a place for-""I did not ask for a tour guide's opinion on the cleanliness of your basement," I interrupted, letting a fraction of my father's lethal impatience bleed into my tone.
"I asked for access to it. I am a Guild representative from your sister branch in Eastwatch, I'm sure Guildmaster Harcourt would not object to me speaking to one of our members." The clerk swallowed hard, his aura flashing a bright submissive yellow.
"Of course, Your Grace. I will have someone escort you immediately."
"See that you do." I waited as he frantically signaled for a runner, my heart hammering as a group of angry-looking mages eyed me with ill-intent. The runner led me down a winding spiral of stone, far beneath the polished grandeur of the main hall. The air became cooler, the smell of monster blood and armor oil rising to meet us. The loot intake vaults were a maze of iron cages and heavy oak tables piled high with junk and dungeon overflow.
"Wait outside," I told my guards as we reached a set of heavy double doors. They hesitated, exchanging a glance, but a sharp look from me rooted them to the floor. I needed this conversation to be private. Intimidation was a tool, but an audience would only make someone like Garrick more defiant. I pushed through the doors alone. The room beyond was a breathtakingly large sorting floor. In the center, standing over a table covered in bloody chitin and cracked mosnter cores, was a towering ursani.
He possessed the same mountainous build as Fenris, the same thick brown fur, but where my tutor had radiated a gentle scholarly warmth, this bear looked like he had been carved from rock. His fur was heavily streaked with grey, one ear notched, his hands clad in thick leather gloves that covered his claws, face buried in an inventory ledger.
"Are you Garrick?" I asked, my voice echoing in the otherwise silent space, sorters apparently already gone for the day. The ursani finished writing his line, wiped his quill, and turned slowly. His dark eyes swept over me, taking in the silk gown, the delicate features, and finally, the crest on my coat. My [Social Insight] flared, nearly blinding me with a violent spike of crimson hatred that radiated from him like heat from an open furnace.
"How can I help you?" he said, his voice a neutral tone. Admirable restraint.
"I am looking for information regarding a System cartographer. An ursani named Fenris, I am told you are his cousin." I kept my distance, maintaining my aura suppression with some effort. This story has been taken without authorization. Report any sightings. Garrick went entirely still and then crossed his arms over his chest, dropping the ledger on a nearby table.
"Why does the Lady Thorne care about a scholar? That is who you are, is it not?" I ignored the rhetorical question.
"I am told he possessed certain obscure maps of the Deep Roads." I leaned into the arrogance he expected from me.
"My family is expanding our interests, you may have heard. We require his expertise. If you know where he is, I am prepared to compensate you handsomely for the introduction." Garrick let out a scoff that bared his yellowed canines.
"Your family wants his expertise? That's rich." He took a heavy step toward me, his sheer mass intimidating even without intent.
"Fenris left the High Peaks because he believed he could civilize you people, strip your nobility of its arrogant condescension." He glared down at me, the hatred in his aura swirling with a heavy undercurrent of grief.
"Clearly he failed. He disappeared in your territory, Lady Thorne. So, if you want to know where he is, I suggest you ask your father." As with every awful thing in my life, it seemed this too would come back to land at the feet of Alastair Thorne. Hold the line, I told myself. If you crack, he gives you nothing.
"My father employs thousands of people, I do not keep his roster," I said, clipped and cold. Garrick's eyes narrowed.
"You humans," he spat, the word dripping with venom.
"You think you can just throw gold at the world and it will cough up its secrets. I have nothing to sell you. Get out." He turned his back on me, returning to his ledger. I needed to know. The desperate, aching part of me that still loved the gentle bear who had read me histories in the library screamed for closure. If I walked away now, I would never know his fate. I took a breath.
SKILL ACTIVE: [Aura of Command] I pushed my Charisma, fueled by my [Shadow Dancer] class, outward like a physical weight, an overwhelming psychological pressure, a suffocating blanket of aristocratic authority designed to break the will of subordinates.
"Turn around," I commanded, the air vibrating with an unnatural power. Garrick stiffened. He fought it, his large shoulders trembling as his natural resistance warred against the System-backed weight of my command. Slowly, agonizingly, he turned back to face me. His eyes were wide with a mix of fury and violation.
"I will not ask you again," I said, every word tasting bitter.
"What do you know about Fenris?" He bared his teeth, fighting the compulsion, but the sheer disparity in our attributes forced the words from his throat in a ragged growl.
"They found him a year ago," Garrick choked out, tears of rage and sorrow welling in his dark eyes.
"Washed up on the jagged rocks of Eastwatch Bay. Dead." I kept my face frozen, but inside, a chasm opened up. Dead. Not hiding. Not imprisoned. Dead.
"There are rumors," Garrick continued, his voice shaking with the effort of speaking against his will, "of an island in the bay. A dungeon where the nobility send problems to disappear. The fishermen say the currents sometimes drag the refuse back to shore. Fenris was found sewn inside a heavy canvas sack." I felt sick. He had thrown him away like garbage. But for what purpose? Fenris had never been anything but obedient to my father.
"The chains that bound the sack must have rusted through, or snapped on the reef," Garrick said, his voice breaking, the image clearly haunting him.
"But the worst part... the thing that proves what kind of monsters you humans are..." He glared at me, the hatred burning through the compulsion.
"The sack was ripped open... from the inside." I blinked, the implication chilling my blood.
"They didn't even have the decency to kill him before throwing him into the sea," Garrick whispered, his paws balling into fists.
"They threw him into that freezing dark alive. He fought for his last breath, tearing his fingers to the bone trying to claw his way out of that canvas. Fenris was gentle, a scholar. You had no right!" I felt my lungs constrict, a sympathetic panic gripping my chest. I dropped the [Aura of Command], stepping back as if burned. The pressure in the room vanished. Garrick slumped forward, catching himself on the edge of the table and gasping for air.
"Are you satisfied, Lady Thorne? Did you get your money's worth?" I couldn't speak. I reached blindly into my cloak, my fingers numb, and pulled out the heavy pouch of gold I had prepared. I tossed it onto the table. It landed among the bloody monster cores with a thud. I had hoped the sum would have purchased his willing cooperation, maybe even gratitude, but now it just looked like blood money... perhaps that was what it had always been.
"I am... sorry for your loss," I whispered, feeling incredibly small.
"Keep your gold," Garrick snapped, not touching it.
"And keep away from me. If I ever see you down here again, I won't care about your guards or your father's retribution." I turned and fled, pushing through the heavy double doors, ignoring the questioning looks of my guards, and walked as fast as my heels would allow toward the stairs. I needed air. I needed to not be a Thorne for five fucking minutes. My vision blurred with unshed tears as I blindly navigated the corridors of the Guild Hall.
I didn't want to go back out into the city, back to the carriage where I would have to face Victor and pretend my soul wasn't rotting inside my chest, pretend the horrors of our family could somehow be cleansed. He'd been there all that time, in the bay. Suffering on some forsaken island in that dark water I had looked out at from my balcony every morning of my childhood.
While I attended lessons in classrooms or practiced choreography in dance halls, smiled and curtsied in ball rooms, feigned interest in suitors who feigned no interest in me... Fenris had been dying just out of reach. The roar of a crowd bled through a heavy set of arched double doors to my right. I pushed the doors open and slipped into the shadows of the tiered observation gallery of Arena Four, seeking a distraction. A crowd had formed around the small training pit, the seats packed full of people.
I fell into the shadow of an empty alcove near the back with a clear view of the brightly lit sand pit below. I tried to command the image of Fenris in the dark water out of my mind, his claws scraping uselessly on thick fabric as the life was choked from his lungs. Down on the sand, a dwarf in heavy training plate was methodically dismantling a large human a foot and half taller. I recognized the dwarf vaguely from Guild dossiers, Instructor Bagor, a gatekeeper for the lower ranks.
He moved with purpose and brutality, absorbing a flurry of strikes before sweeping the man's legs and leveling a wooden mace at his face.
"Dead!" Bagor shouted. I took a shaky breath, pressing the heels of my hands against my eyes. My father killed him. He killed him, and I sat at his table and drank his wine. The guilt threatened to bring the whole artifice of my failed revolution down on my head, pressing me into the stone bench. The crowd around me murmured as a new figure stepped out onto the sand. I looked down at the challenger who spoke words I couldn't hear, grateful for anything to pull me away from my dark thoughts.
He had the look of an adventurer: he was unusually tall, scarred, well proportioned, tan skinned and broad-shouldered, wiry but not without muscle. His dark brown hair was cut short, facial hair fashioned in a style that was popular in the far East, a mustache over short whiskers along his chin. He was wearing no armor and had a bizarre but mesmerizing metal prosthetic strapped to his right shoulder in place of an arm.
It glowed faintly blue, gears whirring inside it, runes flashing as he moved the articulating metal fingers with fluid ease. As he stepped onto the sand, my [Social Insight] snagged on him. I blinked, trying to read his aura, but my vision flooded with blinding static, a roaring wall of visual noise that gave me an instant, piercing headache. I winced, rubbing my temples. An aura of that magnitude... maybe a high-level stealth skill, but no, it was distorted not hidden. I'd never seen anything like it.
Surely anyone with an aura skill could see it, but nobody else in the arena seemed to be noticing. Intrigued despite my grief, I leaned forward. The announcer's magically amplified voice boomed through the hall announcing the gauntlet match. The crowd jeered, mocking the man's missing limb and lack of armor. Bagor exchanged words with him in the arena, but I couldn't hear what was said, an arrogant smile playing across the challenger's lips. It seemed he was as foolish as this match would suggest.
Bagor launched forward and swung his mace in a horizontal arc that would have caved in the stranger's skull. I expected the one-armed man to scramble, to try and dive away. Instead, he waited a single beat before dropping to one knee. The mace whistled through the empty air, so close to his head that a tuft of hair was ripped out of it.
The stranger pivoted smoothly, sliding into the opening Bagor's momentum had created, and brought his wooden practice sword up, pressing the tip gently against the exposed skin of the dwarf's throat. The arena fell silent. I could hardly believe what I was seeing. I had spent my entire life watching Victor fight, but my brother was a hurricane, relying on overwhelming power, terrifying speed, and the brutal weight of his [Blood Knight] class.
This nameless stranger was dismantling the dwarf with no expression whatsoever, as if he already knew the result and was going through the motions.
"Yield," the man said, loud enough for the shocked crowd to clearly hear. The fight should have been over, by rights the challenger had landed a killing blow, and he'd done it without the System's aid, as the rules required. Bagor roared in frustration.
"Not good enough!" he shouted, twisting away and attacking again. The dwarf threw everything he had at the one-armed man who pivoted off each new combination effortlessly, my years training with the lightning quick Renard allowing me to track his precise and elegant movements. Every single time the dwarf pressed his edge, the stranger was already there. He stepped into the strikes, deflecting the heavy mace with his prosthetic, catching wrists, sweeping legs. It was a systematic, surgical dismantling.
It was the most beautiful, terrifying display of martial intelligence I had ever seen. It was as if the stranger was inside Bagor's head, pulling his strings like a puppet. On the fourth round of fighting, each more clearly lost than the last, the one-armed man disarmed Bagor, kicked away his shield, and put his boot squarely on the heavy dwarf's chest, leveling the wooden sword at his face. Bagor gasped for air, staring up at him. He spoke, too low to hear.
The stranger sheathed his wooden sword and mouthed words back at Bagor that I couldn't make out.
"Pass!" Bagor shouted finally to the clerk's booth.
"Give the man his badge." The crowd around me exploded into pandemonium, shouting and cheering the impossible upset. I didn't cheer. I sat frozen in the shadows, my mind racing as the stranger turned and walked calmly out of the arena, disappearing into the tunnels.

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