Chương 220: 85. Provocation 1
Critical Astral:Lost · Mr. AnonMirror · 270 chương · ~30 phút đọc · Tạo 17/08/2026
Some things look ambiguous from a distance. Up close, they're lethal. Like right now. Shield in my left hand, axe in my right, armor strapped tight. The training bay's cold white lights pressed straight down, turning the sensor-lined ring on the floor into something that looked like a public execution square. Standing across from me, Maki had already raised her shield, axe handle angled back at her shoulder — a stance clean enough to be the cover of a training manual.... Damn it.
Everyone else who stepped into this ring was here to hurt each other. I stepped in and first had to manage my own heartbeat so it didn't sound like an illegal engine mod. The ten pairs of eyes outside the line were brighter than they'd been watching D and Jess. That wasn't spectating. That was an audience waiting for the curtain to rise.
D stood just outside the boundary, holding the room's control terminal like a game show host moonlighting as a disaster architect, grinning like his favorite broadcast slot had finally rolled around.
"Alright," he said.
"Please welcome tonight's main event — two people who've already got remarkable off-the-record chemistry back in the dorm, now finally legally authorized to face each other with axes."
"Say one more word," I told him, "and I test my shield angle on you first."
"Wow." D pressed a hand to his chest, genuinely moved.
"Look at that — the match hasn't even started and the gunpowder's already this thick. That's the value I bring as a matchmaker."
"I'd lean more toward calling it a sin," Harvey said from the back. Jess leaned against a modular wall, shield hugged in, the heat and satisfaction of her own bout still lingering. Her gaze slid from me to Maki and back again. She didn't say a word. But the expression translated perfectly. Come on, then. Let's see exactly what this looks like. Maki, for her part, wasted zero breath. She just looked at me, voice level to the point of sounding cold.
"Ready?"
"You're really opening with regulation phrasing at a time like this?"
"What else?" Maki said.
"You want me to make small talk first?"
"Please don't," I said.
"I'm worried about what everyone would misread into that."
"Misread what?" D cut in instantly, clearly having been crouched there waiting for me to feed him that line.
"Misread just how badly you need to get hit today." The room laughed. Maki's mouth didn't move, but I'd swear there was, for one brief instant, a flicker in her eyes — something close to watching a farce and finding it faintly, quietly funny. The system chime sounded. Sparring mode engaged. Valid conditions: confirmed hit, forced boundary exit, vital-zone contact. Countdown. Three, two, one—"Begin." I didn't rush in. Neither did Maki.
Which left the scene as something peculiar, unsettling, and deeply unsuitable for an audience of classmates. I raised my shield a little. Maki raised hers a little. I edged left, half a step. Maki matched it with half a step right, her angle landing exactly on the line I liked to cut through. No aggression. No shouting. No treating the other person like a door to be kicked in, the way Jess had. We circled half the ring like that. The room went quiet for two seconds. By the third, D couldn't take it anymore.
"I gave you a sparring match, not a blind date. Fight!" The room broke up laughing. Heat hit my ears instantly.
"Shut up!" I yelled back over my shoulder.
"See?" D said, entirely reasonable.
"That vicious with me, and with Kushima you just slowly circle. That's preferential treatment."
"Because you're more punchable!"
"Thank you, finally some engagement. Kushima, say something too — standing there like that, you look like you're here to sign a prenup." Maki didn't even glance at him. She kept her eyes on me.
"Drift again and I move first."
"You say that like you're doing me a favor."
"I've always been calmer than you."
"Quick to admit that when it suits you." My mouth kept talking. My feet didn't stop. Because I knew Maki wasn't joking. That's the most inconvenient thing about her — some days her words are all blade, some days all incident report, but the second she's somewhere that requires calculating distance, angle, and who forces who into the dead line first, she turns into a very specific kind of dangerous. Not because of presence. Because she genuinely runs the numbers. So I stopped stalling.
Shield forward, axe skipping the high line — I flipped it up from below, probing the junction of her right elbow and shield rim. Her reaction was infuriatingly fast. She dropped her shield face almost simultaneously, deflecting my line with a solid clack, then rode the momentum forward, shield corner angling toward my chest. I slid sideways and let it pass.
"Ohhh—" D raised his voice from outside.
"Finally, something that moves like a living creature."
"Would it kill you to be quiet for one second?" Harvey asked.
"No, but I'd get lonely." I backed off, biting back a curse. That sequence was pure Maki. No wasted motion, no wasted emotion, no wasted expression. She wasn't trying to look good. She was telling me, very directly: probe like that, and this is what you get back. I reset my footing. Maki didn't rush to chase — she just brought her shield back into a position that locked the centerline down completely. The tale has been illicitly lifted; should you spot it on Amazon, report the violation. Damn it.
Even her stance looked like it was saying your problem to solve. I came in from a different angle. This time, not a straight probe. I dropped my left shoulder, sold a cut to the right, and the instant Maki's shield tilted to answer it, I pivoted my footing and drove for the inside line on her axe-hand side. One of my better dirty tricks. Not strength. Just the kind of thing where you make someone believe you're coming from one side, then slip in from the other. Against Roy, it probably would've worked.
Unfortunately, this wasn't Roy. She didn't fully buy it — just a brief shift in her eyes — and she slammed the axe handle down, sealing off the space my wrist was aiming for. The two wooden training blades locked together, and the distance between us collapsed instantly. Too close. Close enough that through the clear visor I could see the rhythm of her breathing, and that same infuriating, cold, entirely focused light in her eyes. We held there for a second. Two seconds. Then D went off again.
"You two fight like a married couple in the middle of a midlife crisis!" My grip nearly slipped.
"Where exactly is the midlife crisis in this?!"
"You're locked together and neither of you wants to be the one to actually swing! What else would you call that?!" Jess laughed out loud — not the polite kind, the sharp, delighted, very Jess kind.
"He's not wrong," Jess called, eyes bright, watching us.
"That last lock really did look like you two debating whether to refinance a mortgage together."
"Where does this metaphor even come from?!" Maki had apparently reached her limit on the running commentary too. She moved first. Not some wide, dramatic assault. A short, cold, entirely-her three-hit sequence. Shield pressed down, stripping the leverage I had against her axe handle clean off; a step forward, shoulder line cutting straight through the center; and finally, the butt of her axe tapping cleanly against the outside of my knee. Beautiful. Also dangerous.
My leg jerked back on instinct, shield dropping to cover. The hit didn't land clean, but my weight had been forced back half a step, and the boundary line flashed right behind my heel. System: yellow. Boundary warning. Someone outside sucked in a breath.
"That angle was so clean," Akari said quickly.
"So you cut the shield first, then force the center of gravity..." Roy murmured. Harvey glanced at him.
"You sound like someone who just heard the gospel."
"I'm learning."
"Good. Means there's still hope." I reset my footing and glared at Maki.
"Were you just trying to knock me straight out of bounds?"
"What else?" she said, tone perfectly level.
"You put your own feet there."
"You talk exactly like a liability report."
"Because it's accurate." Damn it. That's the worst thing about her. She's not mocking you. She's genuinely pointing out where you went wrong. And because she's sincere about it, you can't even manage righteous anger. I took a breath. No more stalling. Fine. You want tempo? Let's go. I pressed the shield to the centerline, letting her get used to another frontal test; Maki naturally sealed the angle, like she was waiting for me to walk straight into it.
But right as she set up for my second step, I dropped the pressure entirely, slid along the outside of her shield, and swung the axe not at her wrist this time, but toward the neck-shoulder contact point. Riskier than before. Closer, too. Maki finally stopped being a mountain. Her shoulder line shifted; behind the visor, her eyes flashed with something real. Her shield couldn't recover in time, so she had to cross-block with the axe handle, eating the angle head-on.
The wooden training blade scraped across the sensor surface with a sound that wasn't pretty, but was deeply satisfying. System: yellow, then red. Valid graze.
"Yes!" D shouted first.
"Finally! That's more like it!" Jess let out a short whistle.
"Not bad, Hoshino," she said, grinning.
"That one finally didn't look like you were negotiating with her." The corner of my mouth had just started to rise when Maki closed the distance right back. She holds grudges. No — she believes in settling accounts on the spot. The instant I grazed her neck-shoulder marker, she used the fact our weapons hadn't fully separated yet, twisted her shield inward, and closed in until even my retreat space had been shaved down another layer. The first thought that crossed my mind wasn't trouble. It was: too close.
A wildly unprofessional thought. Also terribly timed. Maki then demonstrated, in practical terms, exactly what happens to people who get distracted. Her axe handle hooked up, catching the bottom edge of my shield. Her other hand drove the shield face forward — a direct shove. My footing broke, and before I could recover, the flat of her training axe was already resting cleanly against the sensor zone on my chest. System: red. Valid hit. Dead silence. Then the room came apart.
"Hoshino, what were you even doing?!" D was laughing so hard he could barely stand.
"Your face just now looked less like you were fighting and more like you'd suddenly remembered whether you left the stove on!"
"Shut up!"
"No, seriously—" D grabbed the console, wheezing.
"I thought maybe I'd just put you two too close, but that last one — I can't. That was exactly it." Maki stepped back, reopening standard distance. Her breathing was still steady, just a faint sheen at her temple — the only proof that face, always unreasonably composed, actually belonged to someone with a body temperature. She looked at me, flat.
"You lost focus."
"I know!"
"Then focus."
"Could you deal with the announcer over there first?"
"No need," Maki said.
"He's loud. He's not wrong." That sentence landed harder than the axe had. Jess laughed even harder, leaning into D's side like they'd genuinely joined forces for the occasion.
"First time I've found you useful," Jess said, still laughing.
"At least you raised the entertainment value."
"Thank you for the recognition." D lifted his chin, smug.
"I've always been a full-service host."
"Full-service instigator," Harvey said.
"There's a difference."
"There isn't, actually." Akari, head down, logging hit angles fast, still couldn't resist adding: "That close-range bind into the center cut was genuinely instructive, though."
"Thank you. At least someone's watching the technique," Maki said. I turned on her immediately.
"Are you implying I was only here to embarrass myself?" Maki answered, perfectly calm: "Not implying."... Right. Fine. I decided I was done being polite this round.
"Again," I said. Not out of temper. Out of genuine provocation — that infuriatingly composed tone of hers had gotten under my skin. Maki gave one small nod. We were both faster this time. None of that strange, adult-level circling from before. The moment shields met, the exchange was clean and direct, footwork no longer dragging.
Maki was still steady, but I could feel she'd dialed her seriousness up a notch — not because she needed to win, but because she knew I wasn't going to let myself be publicly schooled quite so visibly again. Shield on shield, axe on handle, the cold air churning hotter with our breathing and footwork. I opened three times — two deflected clean, one that pushed her right. She cut back twice — one grazed my shoulder, one I ate whole with the shield.
Neither of us was a power fighter, so the longer it went, the more it became a contest of who could read the other's next entry point first. The noise outside changed too. At first, it was a show. Then it was genuinely technique. Roy quietly discussed a step differential with Aida. Evelyn tracked our weight shifts. Ash stood at the back with his usual these two are trouble expression, but sharper now. D was still D. He could watch with total focus and never once stop talking.
We locked up again, weapons nearly tangled, and he finally couldn't hold it.
"Alright, alright — one more step and you two are going to kiss!" That sentence landed, and my rhythm scrambled — not metaphorically, literally — for half a beat. Because this time the distance was even closer than before. I could nearly see the fine shadow at the base of Maki's lashes through the visor, and — worse — the way her eyes flicked at that line, even though her expression didn't move. The result: we both tried to pull back, and both tried to hold ground, at the same time.
A beat later, both shields slammed together with a flat smack, axe handles tangled, the whole posture as awkward as it was possible to be. Half a second of silence. Then it exploded.
"I'm done," Harvey wheezed, folding over.
"D, you're genuinely unwell."
"This one's not on me!" I protested instantly. D raised both hands, laughing, managing a rare, thoroughly unconvincing display of sincerity.
"Okay, okay, I'll own this one," he said.
"I shouldn't have provided documentary-grade ringside commentary at the exact moment your distance had already dropped below standard social threshold." Jess laughed hard enough to tilt sideways, sliding neatly onto his line.
"First time you've admitted fault," she said.
"I thought the only thing you'd ever confess to was being handsome."
"I've always been honest," D said.
"Today's honesty just happens to be more specific."
"Specific enough to nearly cause a fatality," Lan added, cold. Maki finally stepped back and reset her shield. She didn't smile outright. But I could tell — that last moment had knocked her off her rhythm too. Not the flustered kind. The kind where you're forcibly yanked out of a controlled tempo and dumped into everyone else's chaos. Watching that happen to Maki was, frankly, worth the price of admission. I forced my breathing down and did my best to look unaffected.
"Still going?" I asked. Maki looked at me. Two seconds.
"Yes," she said.
"Excellent," D perked right back up.
"That's the spirit. The Federation's future can't stall out in unresolved tension—""Say one more word," Maki and I said, almost simultaneously. D clapped both hands over his mouth.
"Sealed. I'm sealed." The room laughed again. How that final exchange ended, I honestly couldn't describe cleanly — it felt less like a clean match and more like a prolonged, mutually unhealthy tug-of-war. No decisive win. Maki still had the edge in stability; I'd genuinely forced a few real reactions out of her on the close entries. The system's final log read mutual hits, with Maki holding a slight overall advantage. Fair. Also infuriating. More infuriating still — I couldn't argue with it.
When it ended, I pushed my helmet up. Forehead soaked, breathing uneven. Maki was better off, but not by much — the inside of her armor collar was visibly damp. D hopped down, glanced at the log, then at both of us.
"Conclusion," he said.
"Both of you are dangerous."
"Thanks. Nutritional value: zero," I said.
"No." D shook his head, unusually sincere for exactly two seconds.
"I mean it. Kushima's rock-solid. You're good at finding gaps. And the second you two get close, the whole scene heads somewhere that has no business going in a Security report."
"That's the zero-nutrition part," Maki said. Jess slung her shield over her shoulder, the amusement still not fully gone.
"He's not wrong about one thing," she said.
"Your second half was a lot better, Hoshino. At least it stopped looking like you were trying to work something out emotionally."
"When was I ever doing that?!"
"Round one," Jess said, without hesitation.
"First half of round two, too," D added.
"Shut up!"
"Copy. I reserve the right to state facts." Harvey pressed a hand to his forehead, laughing.
"I suddenly feel bad for Sergeant Takenaka," he said.
"He just wanted to teach shipboard defense. This is one step from an emotional battlefield."
"No," Lan said.
"Emotional battlefields at least have structure. This one doesn't." I was about to argue when the outer door gave a soft chime. Not an alarm. Just the tone of an access unlock.

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