Chương 71: Volume 1 End. Start of Volume 2

Hi all, Thanks for reading and hopefully enjoying my story so far. I will end volume 1 here and start volume 2. I will release volume 2 chapters straight away. The story will continue where Volume 1 finished. I would love some feedback from anyone reading this. In the comments just write something. Who was your favourite character? This narrative has been unlawfully taken from Royal Road. If you see it on Amazon, please report it. Is there any major story breaking flaws?

What you think of Tim/Lia and Riku/Varek's relationship? What are some glaring issues needing to be fixed in volume 1? Is the Slice of life flirting and death battles soon after too jarring? Does anyone think there are too many main characters? Did you lose track because of it? Really any feedback is appreciated as no one in my personal life knows i am writing this. Does the constant POV change between each persons bodies work? Thanks