Chương 114: 44.Confinement 44-4
Critical Astral :Academy Enrollment · Mr. AnonMirror · 267 chương · ~24 phút đọc · Tạo 17/08/2026
With the bunker locked for seventy-two hours, "exit plan" didn't mean leave now. It meant: when the door does open, who moves first, in which direction, and who gets to talk for the first minute outside. You don't sort that out in advance, you end up yelling over each other on freshly roasted ground, half-dehydrated, while everyone scrambles for the loudest voice. Just imagining it made my stomach hurt. I got off the bed slowly and settled at the table. Maki slid a cup of processed salt water over to me.
Still tasted like seawater and rust sulking in a bottle. I took a sip and nearly folded.
"Maki, has it occurred to you this might kill me faster than the wound?"
"Then you're not drinking enough," she said, flat.
"Your bedside manner is remarkably consistent."
"You're alive. You don't need comfort." …Right. Very Maki. And for some reason, more aggravating than usual today. The eight of us drifted over to the table. Last night's let's not kill each other first consensus had grown a bit of spine overnight. Not trust yet. Just mutual awareness: these people, at minimum, hadn't stolen anyone's water while they slept or kicked anyone's knife across the room. In the Evaporation Forest, that counted as advanced socialization. Akari led.
"First, confirm something," she said, looking at me.
"When the door opens, you won't be back to yesterday afternoon's movement capacity." Very direct. I set the cup down.
"Is that concern or you setting up for a grab at command?" D made an appreciative little noise. Jess just lit up with a here we go expression. Akari didn't dodge or pretend.
"Both," she said. Good. I could work with that kind of asshole. She spread a simplified sketch of the bunker's surrounds on the table—the one she and Harvey had reconstructed from memory last night. Ravine mouth, salt pit, burnt root high ground, thermal pockets, yesterday's approach line, a few likely observation spots—all marked clearly. Akari tapped the southwest side.
"Once the door opens, first priority isn't where to go. It's who's already waiting. Fixed bunkers always have someone watching them. The ones I dropped yesterday don't mean their entire team is gone. Doesn't mean no one else logged this spot."
"Agreed," Harvey said.
"And the Gale will have changed the terrain again. Old cover and heat pocket patterns may not hold." Maki added: "On top of that, with Hoshino injured, she can't sprint for long or make large evasive shifts. If we take suppression right on exit, Team 144's original rhythm needs to be reworked." Hard to argue with any of that. Hard enough to piss me off. I looked at Akari.
"So. Say it. Don't walk me around the block to tell me I'm half-crippled." She looked at me steadily, dead-fish eyes unreadable.
"First ten minutes after the door opens, temporary command passes to me." The table went quiet. Jess shot upright.
"Hey." D didn't jump in, just folded his arms and watched me. Harvey glanced over. Maki stayed silent, but I could tell she was waiting for my answer. Good. This was the part of negotiation that sucked. Not because the ask was offensive. Because she was right. I swallowed another mouthful of terrible water.
"Reasons," I said.
"Three," Akari said, holding up her hand, tone as flat as if she were reciting a menu.
"One, exit minute is most likely to run into mid-to-long range suppression, not route puzzles. Two, you can't take a second hit. Three, yesterday already showed—once firelines and height advantage are in play, Team 144 needs someone who can decide on fire without your consent." Jess rolled her eyes.
"So we're cavemen with melee weapons." Akari glanced at her.
"Yesterday you were."
"…Can't even argue with that." I almost laughed. My side reminded me not to. I studied Akari. No theatrics, no pressure, not even deliberate dominance. Just putting the facts down like a knife laid flat for inspection. People like that were the hardest to deal with. You couldn't really hate the conclusion—they were too correct. You could only hate that they were. My fingers tapped the rim of the cup.
"Not ten minutes," I said. Her brows didn't move.
"Your counter."
"Break the authority into segments, not a block," I said.
"Once we're out the door—contact judgment, fire suppression, locating blind angles—that's yours. Limited to getting us clear of the door zone alive. Once we're out of the bunker approach, route decisions, shelter assessment, and our next hold point come back to me." This story is posted elsewhere by the author. Help them out by reading the authentic version. D smirked.
"Nice fine print."
"I've been nailed once," I said.
"I have strong opinions about where you need precision." Akari watched me in silence. Those dead eyes looked empty when she was quiet. I knew better now. She was calculating. Several seconds later, she said:"Add one condition."
"Name it."
"If we hit a second suppression contact within fifty meters of the door perimeter, my fire control window extends automatically until we clear line-of-sight lock." That one bit. Also reasonable. I hadn't answered yet when Maki cut in.
"Acceptable, with a condition," she said, tapping the map.
"If Hoshino's HUD indicates a necessary immediate shift to another safe point or cover, you don't get to veto a route change just to preserve firing angles." Akari looked at her. Maki looked back. Neither of them did anything as obvious as bristle, but the air tightened anyway. Two quiet blades laid side by side to compare edges. Finally, Akari nodded.
"Fine."
"Then I'm adding one," D said, voice like the wall had decided to contribute.
"If the first sprint out the door needs someone up front soaking fire, nobody fights me for lead. I go first with the shield. Frost 01 does not get to be point." I frowned immediately.
"I—""Shut up," Jess, Maki, and Harvey said together. …Excellent. Apparently my internal authority was eroding at high speed under the weight of you almost bled out on the floor yesterday. D didn't bother hiding his laugh.
"See? It's not just our team lead who thinks you're not the one who should be sticking your head up first." I ground my teeth.
"Fine. You take point. But at the choke, you listen to Akari—you don't get to play mobile fortress charging straight through."
"Deal." Akari looked back at me, adding the last twist of the blade:"So. Hoshino Shimo. Do you accept?" The problem wasn't the content. It was her throwing the decision all the way back to me. She didn't go with you're injured so you can't. She used the more irritating approach—you're the team lead, so you choose where you're actually the best person for the job. That stung worse than being overruled. Because it wasn't kicking me down. It was forcing me to stand where I actually belonged.
I stayed quiet for a moment, then answered.
"Accepted." Jess shot me a look. I held a hand up to shut her down and continued:"Frost 01 addendum. Temporary command is only valid for that first segment out the door. It doesn't rewrite Team 144's structure. Also—" I looked straight at Akari.
"If you trade my people for a clean firing solution, I don't care if I'm down to half a liter—I'm coming for you." For the first time, Akari's mouth tilted—barely. Not really a smile. More like a flat line that had finally agreed to bend a millimeter.
"Relax," she said.
"I usually trade the enemy first." … Fine. That was almost cool. Annoying. With the temporary command question settled, the rest was easy. The hardest part wasn't dividing water or meds. It was dividing who gets to tell who to shut up and move, and when. Once we'd carved that out, everything else could stack on top. Maki rewrote the shared emergency pool like she was packaging a regulation for review. One: three water tiers—personal carry, squad reserve, common emergency pool.
Two: medical stock tracked by Maki, but use rights split; Akari's anesthetics and saline only draw for emergencies and high-risk post-Gale moves. Three: full-calorie intake twelve hours before door open. No random snacking on high-salt, high-sugar rations. Four: two-layer watch stays—equipment and observation. If anyone shows fever, deterioration, or loss of control during a Purgation Gale, medical orders override.
"Emotional loss of control counts?" Jess arched a brow.
"Especially you," Maki said, without looking up.
"That's targeted."
"That's preventive." D glanced between us and muttered to Akari, "I'm starting to see why you wanted to work with this group." Akari replied, flat, "Still observing."
"Hey, talking like we're a new wildlife species," I said. She thought it over.
"To some extent, you are." Harvey restructured the hardware roles. Provisional formation after the door opened: First position—D, shield up front. Second—Akari, clearing first sightlines and making suppression calls. Third through fifth—flex, depending on terrain. I was very obviously being slotted mid-line, with at least one person glued to my side. Harvey and the tall boy running gear and sensors at the back. Short-haired girl and Jess splitting left-right-close security.
Maki positioned where she could cover me and the supplies. I had one comment.
"So I'm… fragile high-value cargo now?"
"Correct," Maki said.
"High-value cargo with navigation function," Jess added.
"You were shot," Harvey said, blunt.
"And we're not wasting yesterday's tranquilizers and surgery," Akari finished. …Great. Eight people, four phrasings, one shared insult. I snorted.
"Fine. Remember what you just said. When I'm back to full speed, I'm collecting debts." D nodded, honest.
"As long as you get there first." I hated how sincere that sounded. Once the terms were locked in, the air in the main room finally let go a bit. Not relaxed—this place didn't qualify. More like two squads who'd been measuring each other finally stopped pointing barrels directly at each other's faces and turned them five degrees outward toward whatever waited beyond the door. I leaned against the table, side reminding me not to get cocky, and had to admit: Akari was difficult. Not petty-difficult.
The kind of difficult where every sentence went straight for the bone of the problem. Worse, I got along with her. Not in any friend sense. Don't insult me. More in the sense that even though her tone was cold, face flat, and every line felt like an autopsy report, her calls, boundaries, and price points all landed in the narrow band where I could accept them. Had to accept them. People like that were dangerous.
Because it's too easy to start relying on them while you're still telling yourself you're keeping your guard up. I was in the middle of that thought when Akari looked up, right at me.
"What are you looking at?"
"Checking whether our new teammate lead is capable of negotiating in her sleep," I said.
"We can test it," she replied.
"I'll pass. I'm not interested in getting underpriced by dead-fish eyes." She let out a tiny sound—maybe a laugh, maybe not. With her, even a real smile would probably just look like someone drew an extra line on a blank page. The light by the observation window was brighter than at dawn. Not pretty. The Evaporation Forest doesn't do pretty. Just the Gale's residual glow backing off from peak red-grey to a dirty lead. The burnt rainforest outside twisted like scrap just spat from a forge, not cooled yet.
D got up to look out, then came back.
"Still early," he said.
"I know," I said. Not early as in the door. That countdown was also early. I meant it was early for the real part—the part where we took this neat little provisional contract and threw it against the terrain. Some decisions get made before the door even moves. Who will bargain, and how far. Who will give up a block of authority to buy a chance. Who looks like stone and ends up placing the knife exactly where it needs to be. I finished the disgusting salt water and set the cup down.
Akari folded the map and delivered the final summary in that same flat tone:"Then it's settled. When the door opens, I lead the exit through the approach zone. Once we're clear of the lock, route authority returns to you. If anything goes wrong in between, Maki has priority on medical calls, D on protection calls." She paused and looked at me.
"Hoshino, you only have one job."
"What."
"Don't play hero." I watched her for a few seconds and pulled my mouth into something approximating a smile.
"Then you've got one job too."
"Say it."
"Don't make me regret giving you the first slice of my life." This time, she actually smiled. Barely. Short. Like those dead eyes finally conceded: fine, that line is worth bookmarking.
"Deal," she said. Outside, the firestorm crashed again in the distance. Low and heavy, like the planet hadn't decided to let us off yet. I leaned back, let pain and exhaustion sink in together, and had a clearer sense than last night: Week two, day three. This live-door bunker hadn't turned us into some united front. It had just forced two squads to sit at the same iron table and put their most valuable, and most awkward, assets on display. And we closed the deal. Not because we trusted each other.
Because we were awake. That looked worse than trust on paper. In the Evaporation Forest, it usually lasted longer. I watched the heat-shimmering black morning outside the observation window and let out a slow breath. The door wasn't open yet. The route hadn't started. But from this moment on, I knew one thing: When that slab finally lifted, Team 144 wouldn't just be a four-person unit anymore. At least for this Purgation Gale cycle, we wouldn't.

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