Chương 131: 49. Outside the Rulebook 49-3
Critical Astral:Lost · Mr. AnonMirror · 270 chương · ~33 phút đọc · Tạo 17/08/2026
The first night in the new hideout came faster than I expected. And with considerably less dignity. After spending the day digging that semi-sunken shelter, I'd naively thought we might finally get to lie down like human beings once the sun went down. But when eight people actually tried to fit inside—packs, water bladders, med kits, weapons, thermal blankets, tools, and whatever scraps of sanity we had left—I realized the truth. This wasn't a hideout.
This was eight living bodies stuffed into a lidless coffin, praying that whatever wanted us dead tonight was working overtime somewhere else.
"Confirming rotation," I said, crouching near the entrance and adjusting the half-rolled thermal cover to night mode, leaving only two narrow viewports.
"Double sentries at night. First shift: D and Linde. Second: me and Akari. Third: Harvey and Roy. Fourth: Kushima and Jess. Two hours each. If you think you're going to crash, say something. No toughing it out."
"I'll say something right now," Harvey said, slumped against the rock wall with an expression of tragic indignation.
"I can handle it physically, but I refuse to accept that I'm sleeping in a trench I dug with my own hands, under the command of a teenage captain."
"First," I looked up at him, "you're not a teenager. Second, this isn't a trench, it's a premium semi-sunken concealed position. Third, say one more word and I'll put you on solo night watch outside so you can have a heart-to-heart with human progress." Jess, hugging her knees with Kushima's fresh compression bandage still wrapped around her leg, snorted.
"Serves you right. That's what you get for bitching about the era all day."
"You think you can laugh at me? You almost threw hands with Linde this afternoon over ownership rights to a steel cup."
"That was a matter of principle." Linde, leaning against the opposite wall, sounded as flat as ever.
"No. You're just difficult."
"You—""Enough." Kushima cut them off with one word and shoved the field med kit into the designated spot between her and me.
"Sleep positions. Reorganizing. Worst injuries go deepest, active shifts closest to the entrance. If anyone cramps, spikes a fever, or tears a wound open in the middle of the night, I need to reach you."
"You make it sound like you're organizing a morgue," Roy muttered.
"The only difference is you people still complain," Kushima said. Hard to argue. So accurate it almost deserved applause. The final arrangement looked absurd but highly practical. Deepest inside: Roy and Linde, who needed the most rest. Middle section: Jess, Kushima, and me. Closer to the entrance: D and Harvey, ready to fill gaps. Akari flat-out rejected the concept of a "normal sleeping position."
She took the spot right by the viewport, back against the rock, rifle across her knees—not like someone planning to sleep, but like someone preparing to negotiate with the dark. The awkwardness of mixed-gender sleeping became a luxury we couldn't afford. Because what was really bothering everyone wasn't modesty. It was the complete absence of space. This place was democratically cramped. Either your shoulder was jammed into someone else's, or your knee was digging into their back.
Lying flat was a fantasy, rolling over was a crime, and even stretching a leg required asking permission first. Whatever delicate boundaries were supposed to exist between teenage boys and girls had been stomped straight into the dirt by reality in this shitty hole, leaving only—"Whose fucking elbow is that?" Jess hissed in the dark.
"Not mine," I said immediately.
"Then it's Harvey's."
"Why am I automatically guilty?" Harvey protested from the outer edge.
"Because if it were D's elbow, I'd already be dead," Jess said. D was quiet for two seconds, then replied with complete sincerity: "Fair point." I nearly laughed out loud. Akari said, without turning her head: "Quiet." Instant silence. The woman was terrifying. She didn't need to yell or get aggressive. She just dropped two words with the tonal equivalent of ice water down your neck, and everyone automatically started reassessing their life choices. Outside, it was pitch black.
Not the humid, breathing darkness of deep rainforest—this was the dry, cold kind you get where scorched rock meets dead earth. Wind occasionally swept past the entrance, carrying the faint smell of ash and cooling stone. The ground that had been trying to cook us through our boots all day had finally stopped radiating heat. That didn't mean comfortable. It just meant the environment had downgraded from "actively trying to kill you" to "maybe tomorrow." D and Linde took first watch.
D settled near the outer edge, shield within reach. Linde knelt by the other viewport—shoulder injury not fully healed, but eyes steady. I lay down next to Kushima, planning to catch some sleep before second shift. The moment my right shoulder touched the rock wall, every bit of soreness from the day's digging came calling to collect.
"Hss—" Kushima didn't even turn her head in the dark.
"Hurts?"
"What else would I be doing, flirting with the wall?"
"You could try. Maybe it's more self-aware than you are."
"Do you have to be this brutal at night too?"
"Being gentle with patients doesn't help. Being gentle with squad leaders helps even less." Her hand found my shoulder in the dark, pressing accurately along the edge of the brace. I nearly came off the ground.
"You did that on purpose!"
"No. You're inflamed." Her voice stayed low but certain. She pulled out a small light stick, shielded most of the glow with her palm, and quickly checked my shoulder and knee.
"It's red," she said.
"You overdid it digging."
"What was I supposed to do, ask the ground to soften itself?"
"You can ask. If it listens, I'll admit you have leadership charisma." I made a muffled sound and didn't argue back. Because it genuinely hurt. Not just me. Nobody in that hole was actually comfortable tonight. D's left leg stiffened as soon as the sun went down—he'd managed to fake it during the afternoon, but now that the muscle had cooled, every shift in position drew a quiet, sharp breath. Linde's right shoulder twitched occasionally; she kept her face blank, but her fingers tightening gave her away.
Jess's numbness had faded, but the nerve damage was still live—nighttime was prime cramping territory. Roy hadn't fully bounced back from heat exhaustion; he kept jerking awake like something in his dreams was still chasing him. Akari's burns looked minor on the surface, but every time her sleeve caught the skin, her brow compressed for half a second. And then there was the pressure. The moment you stopped moving, everything you hadn't had time to process during the day came crawling back.
The Jäger (Hunter)'s black armor. The exact moment the stun round dropped Jess. That helmet glare on the ridge, scanning, pausing, sweeping over us. And the gnawing knowledge that yes, you'd survived today, but you had zero guarantee your luck would hold tomorrow. If you come across this story on Amazon, it's taken without permission from the author. Report it. All of it waited in the dark, ready to climb out the second you closed your eyes.
So before the first shift even rotated, I already knew tonight was going to be a wash. Mixed-gender interaction heats up—if you pitched that to people who fantasize about teenage wilderness romance, they'd probably expect some blushing, soft-focus bullshit. Unfortunately, the reality is this: when people are exhausted, in pain, and crammed together, body heat and tempers rise together. Every interaction carries the distinct romantic tension of "lean on me one more time and I will bury you first."
For example: Harvey, half-asleep, slumping sideways until his forehead nearly connected with Jess's knee. Jess snapped awake, voice dropping to a hiss.
"Move one more centimeter and I'm using your head as a trauma pad." Harvey's voice was slurred with exhaustion.
"I wasn't—I'm just looking for somewhere flat—""This is a trench, not your mattress."
"My mattress doesn't have D's shield glowing next to my head—" D replied flatly from the outer edge: "Then you can sleep outside."
"I apologize. Suddenly this feels like paradise." On the other side, Roy jolted out of shallow sleep again, breathing ragged like he'd just sprinted uphill. Linde said nothing, just nudged her half-empty water bag a little closer to him. Roy hesitated, then whispered thanks. Linde told him not to drink too fast—flat as a reprimand, but the gesture had already said everything. My situation wasn't any more dignified.
Thirty minutes before second shift, just as I'd finally managed to close my eyes, Kushima started redressing my shoulder. She had me pull my collar aside, then knelt next to me, keeping the light small. Purely medical. The problem was the space was too narrow, the night too quiet, we were too close—and my nervous system was clearly running on frayed wires—so when her fingers brushed across my collarbone to secure the new dressing, my entire body went rigid in a way that was frankly embarrassing.
Kushima noticed immediately.
"What's wrong with you."
"... Nothing."
"Then why is your shoulder twitching."
"Because it hurts—""Your ears are red."
"That's the heat."
"It's nineteen degrees."
"Do you have to maintain full observational accuracy right now?" From somewhere nearby, Jess—who had allegedly been asleep—made a deeply suspicious sound.
"Ooh—""You. Sleep," I hissed at her.
"The captain is so cute when she's flustered."
"Jess, I'm telling you right now, if your leg cramps tomorrow, I will take a long moment to consider whether it's worth treating."
"So mean. Kushima, look at her—she was blushing—""I was not—""I saw it," Kushima said evenly, pressing the last strip of dressing down.
"Both of you shut up. Otherwise I'll have Harvey come over for emotional support." Harvey, who had been dozing, jolted awake at his name.
"Me? I could talk about romance in the trenches—""No thank you," Jess and I said in perfect unison. So yes, the temperature did rise. Just not the kind anyone would write home about. What went up was body heat, irritation, and a very specific variety of shame. Perfectly in keeping with this squad's aesthetic: a mess, but a consistent one. Second shift was mine and Akari's. By the time I crawled to the viewport, the night outside had settled into something complete.
The scorched ridgeline in the distance looked like it had been drawn in ink. The broken rock caught a faint, cold gleam, and the wind was quiet—quiet in a way that made your skin crawl rather than relax. Akari sat at the other viewport, rifle across her lap, as still as she'd been in the bunker yesterday. Like some kind of breathing machine.
"You didn't sleep," she said without looking at me.
"Neither did you."
"I'm on watch."
"So am I." She finally turned her head to look at me.
"You weren't sleeping before your watch started."... Was this woman running a mind-reading module in her helmet. I settled against the rock wall, careful to keep my shoulder away from the hard edge.
"Shoulder hurts," I said.
"And your head's too loud," she added. I didn't argue. Because she was right again, and I hated it. We sat in silence for a while. No Jäger (Hunter) outside. No other students. Nothing in the night that was going to obligingly show up and let us relax. Just wind threading through the rock occasionally, pulling out a faint whisper of shifting sand. I thought the two hours were going to pass just like that. Then I heard the first sound. Click. Very soft. Like something stepping on loose stone and stopping.
My whole body went tight. Akari had heard it too. Her head angled slightly. Second sound. Closer. Scrape... click. Not wind. Wind doesn't stop, shift, stop again like that. I tapped the ground twice with my knuckles. Our silent alarm, agreed on during the day. Everyone inside woke almost simultaneously. No one made a sound. Good. That meant three days of running for our lives hadn't been completely wasted. D opened his eyes first, hand already on the shield. Linde rolled into a low position.
Kushima pressed Roy back down with one hand and reached for the short blade next to her med kit with the other. Jess's leg hadn't fully extended yet, but her eyes were sharp—she looked like a cat with its hackles up. Harvey went straight for the improvised trip-wire alarm near the inner entrance, ready to trigger a remote distraction the moment I signaled. Third sound. Front right this time. Very close. I peered through the viewport. Angled rock shadow. A few scorched, ugly shrubs.
Nothing that looked like a person. Which was worse. Because not seeing anything meant whatever was out there was either more careful than us, or wasn't quite human. I pushed the words out on almost no air:"Hold. Listen first." Nobody moved. Then—a low, wet dragging sound. Something brushing slowly across the rock face. Not large fauna. Too light. Not a Jäger (Hunter). Too slow, no mechanical rhythm. Student? Possible. Also possible: small nocturnal predator, or a scavenger drawn by the smell of disturbed earth.
Harvey pressed close behind me, mouth near my ear, voice compressed to almost nothing.
"Light weight. Single. Uneven stride."
"Human?" I breathed.
"Can't tell. Could be someone moving carefully. Could be the leg count's wrong." The leg count's wrong. Four words that successfully sent a completely unhelpful wave of cold sweat down my spine. The sound outside moved closer. Something was now directly in front of the entrance—just on the other side of our thermal cover and burnt-branch camouflage. I could hear it clearly now. Sniffing. Perfect. That ruled out students. Even the most feral students don't generally crouch outside your hole and smell you.
Not unless they'd gotten hungry enough to consider human meat. In the dark, Jess moved her fingers: want me to go out and stick it? I gave her a look that said very clearly: you move and I'll stick you first. Akari had already shifted her barrel toward the viewport's blind angle. If that cover got pushed inward, she'd have a shot at minimum distance. D raised his shield just enough to protect the most exposed section of the entrance. Another sound. Clearer this time. Something wet and barbed dragging across fabric.
It clicked. Carnivorous vine. Not the large aggressive kind—the small creeping variety that moved at night, following heat signatures and sweat scent. We'd seen one in the first week, near the tents. Same principle, different location. It wasn't trying to force its way in. It was probing. Testing for anything it could hook, work into, wrap around. I held up two fingers for Kushima. Creeper-type.
She understood immediately and reached for the strip of waste cloth soaked in heavy-scent suppressor ointment she'd saved. Harvey understood too, slowly moving his hand to the trip-wire pull. Three days hadn't been wasted. At the very least, we could coordinate without speaking. I counted down with my fingers. Three. Two. One. Harvey pulled.
Twenty-odd meters behind and to the left, the improvised debris alarm he'd rigged during the day snapped taut, sending out a thin, brief metallic tremor—just enough to redirect attention. Clatter. The vine sound at the entrance stopped immediately. Simultaneously, Kushima fed the corner of the scent-soaked cloth through a small ventilation gap on the opposite side, letting the smell drift the other direction. Whatever was outside hesitated. Two seconds.
Then a soft, dry dragging sound, moving toward the noise source. Nobody moved. We waited. Five seconds. Ten. Twenty. When the last trace of that grating sound had faded completely, I let the air out of my lungs. Harvey went boneless against the wall.
"... I hate things that look like plants but behave like burglars."
"That's an excellent description," I said quietly. Jess rolled her eyes in the dark.
"So now we have to watch out for the fucking grass?"
"Welcome to modern education," I said.
"Cutting-edge technology. Primitive ways to die." D eased his shield back into place.
"Didn't wake anything bigger. That's good." Akari looked at me and said, without inflection:"Correct handling." Four words from her carried more weight than a paragraph from anyone else. I'd been about to say obviously—but what came out was just a quiet exhale. Because I knew. If anyone in that hole had been half a second slower, it wouldn't have gone that clean. Without Harvey's remote trip-wire, not fast enough. Without Kushima's scent cloth, not stable enough.
Without Akari covering the blind angle, not secure enough. Without D holding the front, not grounded enough. Without everyone else waking fast and holding still, not smooth enough. Eight people. Plenty of problems. But in those few seconds, we'd actually functioned like a unit. That was more terrifying than any rallying speech. More convincing than any pretty talk about bonds. The rest of the night passed without major incident. Nobody slept well.
Jess cramped again later—bad enough that her face went white, but she refused to make noise about it. In the end Kushima just grabbed her calf and dug in to release the muscle, pinching so hard Jess nearly bit my arm—yes, mine, because I was right there and became the emergency victim by proximity.
"Why are you grabbing me?!"
"Who else?! D's too solid, Harvey's too loud, Roy's too fragile!"
"What kind of criteria is that?!"
"Come on, give me your hand to bite—""Don't make it sound like I'm feeding you to a fucking shark!" She bit me anyway. Not hard, but enough that I seriously considered kicking her straight out of the hole. Akari glanced over and delivered her assessment, completely flat:"You two are close."
"How the hell do you figure that?!" Jess and I exploded in perfect unison. Roy was shaking on the other side, trying not to laugh out loud. Linde turned her face away, but her ears were obviously betraying her. Even D let out a low, unmistakable chuckle. And Kushima, without missing a beat as she refastened Jess's calf bandage, pronounced her verdict:"If you still have energy to bite each other, you have energy to survive." Fine. As logic went, that wasn't entirely wrong.
By the time dawn started creeping in, the sky hadn't actually begun to pale yet, but the wind outside changed first. The dry, cold quiet of night—all that sneaky, ambush-ready stillness—slowly gave way to something more open. The kind of thin, hollow air that only exists in the hour before sunrise. Kushima and Jess took fourth shift at the viewports, and I finally got to lean back against the rock wall and close my eyes. My shoulder still hurt. My legs still ached.
I had actual teeth marks on my forearm, which did absolutely nothing for my authority as squad leader. But as consciousness started to slip away, my last thought was unexpectedly calm. The first night was over. We'd survived it ugly. Survived it cramped. Survived it in pain. We'd nearly been breached by a plant with zero sense of fair play. But we'd survived it. And there were still eight of us. Drifting somewhere between sleep and waking, I heard Kushima murmur something to Jess at the viewport.
Jess muttered something back. Then came the muffled thud of Harvey, dead to the world, rolling over and bumping D's shield. After that, someone let out a very quiet, very brief laugh. The sound was short. Short as a struck match, barely managing to scrape out a single spark of light in this completely fucked world.

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